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Dream: Sept. 14 2008

In a light-flooded room
I sit on the edge of the bed:
black iron four-poster
white cotton sheets
sheer silk curtains.

"Come here," you say.

I come.

Hands on my face,
  lips claiming mine.

I cannot breathe,
cannot stand,
cannot move,
cannot close my eyes.

Knees buckle and you
guide me down,
continuing your attack.

More kisses:
my neck,
my collar bone.

A frantic gasp threatens to escape
my mouth, except that your lips
bar the exit,
my shriek passing into you.

I must fight back,
lean up off the mattress,
give you back your medicine.

At the moment when I would conquer you,
I wake up.

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  • silverscent gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    I enjoyed the mixed imagery you portayed here; comparing kisses with an attack. This was the sense of reality I was looking for in this conest, especially at the beginning. Simple, yet effective. Thanks for entering.