What is a perfect guy you say?
One that talks to you everyday.
The one guy who cares and doesn't pick on you.
The one that says every word that is true.
Who would bundle up with you on a cold winter night.
He doesn't care if his back's cold as long as you're alright.
The kind of guy who looks for you when he's with his friends.
When you ask him to go shopping he doesn't say "It depends."
He stops any vicious rumors about you.
He doesn't care if people hate him for saying "THAT'S JUST NOT TRUE"
No matter how much you're angry with him he just shows up happy.
He still thinks you're beautiful when you're hair's wet and nappy.
He keeps you from fights and tells them to back off.
He pulls back your hair and tells you that it's soft.
He takes things slow and never rushes a thing.
Even if you're terrible he'll love it when you sing.
No matter what he will always come true.
That's the only time you know he means i love you.
A contest entry
- The perfect guy [males only] by written-in-ink.
800 points, ended October 3, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How was i?
Comments
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LOVED IT :]
aww this was adorable ! :]
this is the characteristics of a potentially perfect guy, but still, there's no such thing ;]
i love what you've done with the prompt. it was an excellent take and i enjoyed reading it immensely !
best of luck in the contest !
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aww so sweet and cute
very nice and i like it very much
i love where you took it
and i think that you did an amazing job
thank you so much and good luck -
Well now I'm even more sad than I was before..
Awesome poem dude.
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true, you poured your heart. You gave fitting answer to the contest that sends them reeling under embarasment(in lighter vein), thank you for sharing about perfect guy, god bless you
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