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Laitheus of Bain

Shadows, absence of light
Half condone a presence
Degrees, tainted
Appalling heightened senses
Traces of torture and crimson
Bound to the primitive
Implacable nature
Shaped with some cruel mixture
Oh bane of his kind
Undaunted, it draws me
Like such ravenous hunger
Churning in my blood
Illuminate ability
Captivations of the night

Consuming eyes of cold steel
Amethyst emeralds aglow
Unnatural, beautiful
Immortal soul of binding
Black ebony, shimmers
Rush, a flickering sensation
Hunger... raw
Shall the calling of the lost ones
Remain in descent
Entities of the fallen
Thus vacant, taints the blood

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  • ravensgift gold member
    September 29
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    Beautiful and haunting....


  • Alpha Wolf silver member
    September 15

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    Darkness ever consuming this world...
    Beautifully written,
    As always.
    Vivid images,
    Of dark hunger.
    Well done.

    ~Saint