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Sink or Swim?

Missing image

A body of water depths below

cold with plant life,

tread steady, sooner

or later, I'll 

make it over there,

I mean-

I've always been a 

strong swimmer. 

 

Life. What do I know?

It's here, we live it and

then we die.

It's not fun most times,

hardly anytime,

but when it is,

well it's worth all the hell in the world.

 

Wisdom of 

ancient riddles,

tricks to happiness in

life, and thereafter. . .

For the Smart People,

ones who "GET IT": 

it's all swell really,

but. . . I see a

difference; 

"your wisdom

mattered to me

only after

you were dead."

 

Talk to me in

transcendental

meditations,

concentrating solely

on mandalas,

tattooed inside 

my subconcious mind. . .

 I'd love to see them.

 

I keep holding out

for a someday soon,

maybe that'll be tomorrow.

it wasn't yesterday.

Not even today.

I'll understand

things better,

will learn to forgive

move on

from here. . .

sink or swim

 

I'm not one for sinking.

 

Author notes

Life 101.

ugh.
I've been buried in the poetry of Ann Sexton lately. Can you tell?

I see something working it's way out. Dunno though. I've no idea what you're looking for. And my writing is pretty far out there these days. .

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  • penman gold member
    September 22, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well done. A terrific creation. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Dalaney gold member
    September 19, 2008

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    It's not what I am "looking for" in this contest, but what you got from the image I posted. Now, if I replace the image above with the one the contest is about and read your poem...I can say, it still would fit...sort of...if you ignore the water You are a fine writer - I'm just happy you entered! Love, Lane


  • Swan song gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    yes i can. I like exploring the dark beauty and brilliance of ones mind esp yours. You do hav a way


  • moon2u
    September 16, 2008

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    I like this piece because it shows the thought process
    your poem kind of steps us through an afternoon of thought.
    good luck in the contest


  • CaliOkie silver member
    September 16, 2008

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    This is a thought provoking write with great imagery.

    Good luck in the contest. I think you'll swim.

    Garrison


  • Gwenevere
    September 15, 2008

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    Msditation is a great way of relaxing and puts the mind into focus.I realised this even more whilst I was away and had much more time to listen to myself.I feel I know so much more about myself than I ever did.You won't sink my friend you are too good a swimmer for that , Ros

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