Golden leaves
falling free
A time for rest
for you and me
Hard work of summer
almost done
Fall is coming
time for some fun
Caribbean sunshine
beckons our heart
Time for loving
we will never part
A contest entry
- Autumn Contest for Partners In Crime Group by Partners In Crime.
725 points, ended September 23, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Sucha lovely write. great piece xxx
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nicely put
good luck!
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Very discriptive and well written nice way you inserted a little romance into the scene.
Good job I loved it.
Good Luck in the contest.
ED.
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Your poem has such a positive, uplifting feel to it. And a touch of romance, too. I could go for a nice trip to the Caribbean But, our trip to Florida next month will be just as nice
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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lol, wow, this really gave me a smile
awesome poem kiddo
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Yeah......up to the sun...that's my kind of woman
Loved your autumn thoughts...
XXJeannette
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This is just beautiful my friend
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Beautiful
Good luck in this contest
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