Blinding Light.
It's You.
Your Face.
The Shadows.
Nothing More.
Binding Light.
Your Cologne.
Your Hand.
Your Touch.
Silence.
Blinding Light.
Midnight.
My Name.
Your Lips.
Forever.
Blinding Light.
Shattered.
Hello.
Goodbye.
Almost.
Author notes
Jessifer1792
A contest entry
- FOR THOSE THAT ARE SICK OF HAPPILY EVER AFTER by jcat.
875 points, ended September 20, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tales Of Loss by peregrin.
450 points, ended October 1, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - There'll be rain on our wedding day, rotting roses in my bouquet. by forbidden-colour.
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I'm going to offer one spelling correction - "Cologne"
I like this. The last verse is so simple but speaks volumes.
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simple words that make a good description
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good job
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great~
gr8
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Wow.... I really like this.
It is really fantastically written, and really well said!
Great work!!! -
Beautifully said......This was my hubby and I over the last few weeks and it almost was a good-bye with no more hellos to be heard. Thank you for your entry
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