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Everything: a lie

Everything:
Normalcy
is restored.
When your havoc
is nowhere to be found.
I feel the need to accomplish,
and not just the urge to hear you
whisper lies into my soul.
Time is something to treasure,
when I see how I've wasted it
on your broken promises.
I see everything around me,
now that your hands are gone.
I look back unblinded
seeing your support
was simply to benefit
Yourself.
Contradictory
of your portrayal.
Which was all
a lie.

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  • Taodesteve
    September 17, 2008

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    This is a rare free verse poem that I actually like. I also like the way that the lines grow and shrink. Honestly, I'm not sure what about it I like...