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Mrs. Brittany Kope

Hearts beating,
Minds racing,
Words stuck on tips of tongues.

Bat for lashes,
A thousand catches,
Forever I’ll love you.

There comes a time and there comes a place,
But now for that I feel I must always race
Because every night that passes without you
I’ve decided simply will not do.

Watch you as your mind wanders,
And each touch makes my heart grow fonder.
Smile as I pass you in the hallway, a touch of your hand is really all I need.
Can everyone see we’ve already created our own lover’s creed?

I can always feel what you feel; it’s your constant emotions that I breathe,
And from such things I want no reprieve.
Hand to my heart – can you feel that it beats only for you?
For you and only for you; forever, through and through.

There aren’t many things in this world I truly understand,
Nor things that I could really say I value right at hand.
When you came along, you changed all that right away,
And I can feel it this very day.

Ask me for love, Ask me for faithfulness.
Every wish, for you, I’ll bless.

Some day… hopefully not too far away,
Ask for my hand and take it rightfully as your own.
For I’ve become yours, and you’ve become mine,
And this is how we’re destined to be.

Hearts beating,
Minds racing,
Words on tips of tongues…

Elo; pe, or even to elope!

Love forever your always faithful,

Mrs. Brittany Kope

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  • Uasal Laoch Aingeal gold member
    September 19

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    Its very good Brittany. A great exlamation of your love to a significant other. It flows well and as always your a masterful with your placement of key words to set off the emotion of the poem. Great job


  • Cerbie20
    September 17
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    awww! this is sooo cute britty! i really like the first few lines... very good.


  • WhatAboutLove
    September 16

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    i like it!!

    Hearts beating,
    Minds racing,
    Words stuck on tips of tongues.

    i like this part because it describes how people feel when they see their significant others. at least thats how i felt everytime i saw my bf.