under harvest moon
scents of wood bark fill the air
last breaths of summer
Author notes
prompt; finally fall
traditional haiku-
In a list
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXXV - by Bear by Arkbear.
450 points, ended September 16, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh yes....very rich in imagery and senses turned on.....nice!
This is not as metaphoric as some Ku's I have read, but it does make me want to read it again and delight in its' Fallish feel....very nice
Thank you for entering....God bless you,
Bear ~
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You have captured the moment, scents of wood bark made me think of sounds of wood bark...Silly but a pleasing thought...LOL Very nice!
Dennis
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this is so lovely, I love the smell of wood
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and i love the look of your beautiful face
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What a beautiful take on Fall. I love the "aha" moment... perfectly done. All the best..
Ken
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