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please,

you take my heart with cold hands,
my love with your empty emotions
but you leave me the memories
the one thing I beg you to take from me


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  • jcat gold member
    September 15, 2008
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    I so have wished that I could depart with memories that have left more bitterness than happiness....Wonderful job here!! Thank you for your incredible entry