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shapeless

so beautiful this phantom
who sits before my eyes
one moment filled with innocence
the next a sinful surprise

but between these two disparate halves
something different grows
and whether she is cruel or kind
few will truly know

an oddity amongst us
who cannot seem to find
the one true inhabitant
of her new and shifting mind.

A contest entry

meh, first poem i've written in about 5 months, abnormally short but I wanted it short and sweet.

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  • MessedupMarionette
    September 26, 2008

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    This is really interesting--I really like the second stanza the best. I'm glad my contest got you to write something!!! I can barely go five days without writing! Thanks for entering and good luck!