well he,
came into my life one day,
he caught me by suprise,
and i still cant explain what,
went on between our eyes.
But i know i felt i knew him,
though we had never met,
and i used to wonder everyday,
if our future had been set.
So he,
always seemed to be around,
he always made me smile,
i saw him nearly every day,
and he made life seem worthwhile.
and then one day,
he spoke the words,
he felt the same way too,
and as i looked into his eyes,
at a loss, i knew...
But he,
didn't know my heart had bled,
he hadnt seen the scars,
and though it didnt change his love,
it did make things so hard!
and though it was a struggle,
he never once gave in,
he saw i had been wounded,
and felt the pain within.
And he,
spoke soft words of healing,
he gave to me his all,
and when i pushed his love away,
still i could hear him call...
But then one day,
he caught a plane,
that took him far from here,
and though we would talk everyday,
my heart lost hope he'd reappear.
So he,
gained my trust, my love, my all,
he took all i could give him,
i gained my hope in love again,
my life seemed filled to the brim..
But then one day,
he took my trust,
and with a kiss he tore it,
and like so many times before,
love proved to be my torment.
too quick to trust,
too true in love,
my heart begins to rust,
the very thing i thought i had,
is what i now lack therof
i dont know if i'll love again,
dont know if i can trust again..
dont know how i can be healed again,
when my heart still wont stop bleeding.
Author notes
**Heartbroken-Headcase** Rachel
A contest entry
- First contest,Four options, i'll love you forever if you enter? by Jaffa-.
560 points, ended November 11, 2008, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh My. Thanks so much for your entry. It has truely made this conpetition somthing that will really stand out from the crowd. I thought it was absolutly amazing. So much emotion... just to let you know... you succeeded in the opjective and really gave me a good old cry. I particularly loved the 10th stanza. it was amazing and really made this poem spectacular!
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lol
love poems written in anger never turn out well. lol. oh well -
The most important trust is the one you have in yourself, the one that says no matter what I can take care of myself. Love is a blossoming gift and to often blossoms fade, but when you know you will be there for yourself and handle it you enjoy the flower before it fades and plant the seeds so it may come again. There is so much of life in the tale you tell and like most magic it finally fell apart and became tears in your heart. May you gain from what you have learned take the best and know he was the fool when he spurned.
Love, Tom B.
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