brisk september dawn
waking autumn art divine
God's canvas unfolds
Author notes
Prompt-Finally, Fall
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXXV - by Bear by Arkbear.
450 points, ended September 16, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nicely done for the form. With Jack Frost's breath upon our neck we gaze in wonder nature's fiery display with anticipation first snowflake....
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snowflake? eek! You can have it lol don't want any here.
Even your comment is poetic
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Hello
1st & last L are not as original as I believe you could have penned......2nd L is really pretty....love that presentation as well
Nice ~
Thank you for entering,
God bless you,
Bear ~
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Thanks for the critique. I'm still trying to get the idea of this form. You're right, it could have been more original.
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And what a beautiful masterpiece is made manifest before our very eyes! A time of beauty in transition. Well done!
Dennis
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Thank you for the kind comment, it is much appreciated.
Linda
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What a beautiful write... you've done a wonderful haiku and your form is spot on! Bravo!
Ken
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Yay Thank you! I did something right!
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Truly beautiful and very creative.
All the best with this
Gaylene
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Thank you for being so sweet.
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Wonderful
Very creative and well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you
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Beautiful! Capturing the season as a exquisite gift from God. Stunning sis!
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I think when the leaves change to their brilliance it truly is divine! Thank you Sis..good to see you
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Very well done sis! What a great take on the picture for this one! I love it!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Thank you sweet Sister, I just hope I did it correctly. I don't have alot of experience with this form. But fall is a most amazing season so I just had to give it a try
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