cascades of color
weave through the chill Autumn air
a brindled blanket
Author notes
conformation - The structure or outline of an item or entity, determined by the arrangement of its parts.
brindled - having a grey or brown streak or a pattern or a patchy coloring
Prompt: Finally, Fall
Picture Credit: http://invertedbeliever.deviantart.com/art/feel-the-leaves-falling-68762673
Haiku form (5-7-5)
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXXV - by Bear by Arkbear.
450 points, ended September 16, 2008, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D
Comments
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Great haiku! Love it. Congrats on the bronze.
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well done . . like the picture also . . also "cascades of color" and "brindled blanket" . . congrats on the trophy
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Mmmm...splendid in presentation as well as movement ~
Exceptional imagery in last L ~
I like *weaving*......what about *chilled*?
Very nice my Friend,
thank you for entering,
God bless you,
Bear ~
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Wonderful blend of words and picture, giving a feeling of a masterpiece unfolding before our eyes...don't blink, enjoy it now! Well done!
Dennis
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the pic is beautiful and so is the poem!!! you are awesome!!! keep up he good work! -slick99
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Entirely delightful, good luck in the contest lol
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wow what a great pic...and then even better words to follow Ken
a brindled blanket....I do quite like that, so very fitting for the whole piece, of course, but it just hit the nial for me
Hope you do well with this little gem of a haiku
Cind's
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i love the picture you have used for this wonderful haiku, i don't know form poetry much, but im becoming more aware as i read others,
good luck in the contest, and as always keep up the writing,
~Amy
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Thank you Amy... for the read, the comment, and the encouragement...
Ken -
Seems you know this form well. Your words are beautiful. It's a form I appreciate, but not sure I have it right yet.
Best of luck young man!
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