ideas
rain down upon
the field of necessity
like umbrellas
in a storm
waiting
for the right hand
the right time
to draw it upwards
open to possibilities
providing
for the needs
of the many
while sheltering
the loneliness of one
Author notes
Option 4
A contest entry
- Beneath A 'Brella by Gypsie Ink.
450 points, ended September 17, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautifully done... a wonderful message that touches each of us and, perhaps, opens our eyes... Excellent!
Ken
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Profound!
Wonderful and intuitive! An illuminating write. Thank you for your remarkable entry and best of luck in my contest.
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