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Life Force

Banished into exile,
as vacant last memories
cling onto life-force
lingering one more day.

Echoes of whispering winds
breaking silence of yesterdays.

Bones shrivel and decay
fading remains turn into dust
remnants of forgotten souls....


floating into nonexistence.

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  • Dalaney gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    even without the image posted with your poem, I could still get a clear image of what you wanted to convey. Very well done. Love, Lane