Leaves: crisp falling stars,
More than just before winter,
A colorful dream.
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXXV - by Bear by Arkbear.
450 points, ended September 16, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love how short this is, but yet how powerful! I could never describe something this beautiful in such a short amount of words. I think this is amazing and I love how you compare leaves to falling stars because they are something that should bring us hope because trees are beautiful and we should appreciate the leaves because they are a part of the tree itself.
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Hello
Leaves fall from their trees* is a tad....not original......have heard it many times.....was hoping for more *out of the box* thinking.....thank you for entering,
God bless you,
Bear ~
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Thanks for the comment! I was sort of thinking the same thing, I think it's better now.
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A colorful dream indeed and a prelude to white! Lovely images and complimentary picture.
Dennis
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Very nicely done... words and image draw a wonderful picture of the season... Best of luck.
Ken
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Welcome to AllPoetry
This is a beautiful presentation here.. such beauty portrayed in lines as short as just 3.. amazing. I applaud u for this and keep posting more of such works..
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Welcome to AllPoetry
This is truly beautiful and a delight for me to read
Best of luck in the contest
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