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Through the eyes of God...

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I've seen nothing more beautiful

than the sunset sky

settling down to welcome

moon light

greeting the shadows

that dance upon the waters

 

 

 

I've seen nothing more beautiful

than the stars that wait to shine

on the calmness of the sea

with waves that sing

peace reaches out to touch thee

with a gentle breeze

 

 

I've seen nothing more beautiful

than the clouds that

surrounds the Heavens

and protects the Angels in flight

I've seen it all, through Gods eyes

while standing on a hill top.

 

 

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  • michellemybelle gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    Just lovely! Just magistic visions of peace and beauty. He is amazing!
    Great poem my friend! Good luck in this contest!
    love,
    Michelle


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    September 15, 2008

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    How beautiful!
    Your wording is soothing, peaceful, and so wonderfully written!
    Thank you for sharing such a beauty of a piece and I wish you the best of luck in this contest!


  • Samplette gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    A breathtaking piece of poetry. Beautifully penned. Thank you for entering the contest. A pleasure to read.
    Sam


  • StarEyes
    September 14, 2008

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    Twinsy,

    When you write, there is none that can compare! And this one is just about one of the most beautiful ones, with the images you paint, that I have come across in a very long time! Wonderful Twinsy! Just wonderful!!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and loads of love

    Nyetta


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    September 14, 2008

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    What a miraculous and memorable vision
    you must have had standing atop that
    mountain. There is so much to view and
    experience up there. It's like a whole
    new world that you never even knew existed
    before. Mountains are awesome pieces of
    inspirations in themselves. Just knowing
    that you are in one, across from one, or
    even standing on top of one is an unbelievable
    feeling that not many people get to experience.

    Beautiful work as always my friend!
    All the best to you in this contest and thanks
    a lot for sharing this here!





    Jeremy0826

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