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Death and Rebirth


Dawn marks Summers' death

    Breathless, beating Autumns' lie

          That which is now done.

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  • Arkbear gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    Pretty dark little Ku' you have painted.....nice way to think out of the box ~

    Left me pondering....lasting impression is crucial....nice job,

     

    God bless you,

     

    Bear ~


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    September 16, 2008

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    Good observational poem, the shortening of days, a telltale sign of change.

    Dennis


  • KayJay
    September 15, 2008
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    Interesting take... I like the opening equinox reference. All the best...
    Ken