Void,
empty thoughts
filled
with hot air,
expelled
expectently
into the beyond
and further...
withered hopes,
dreams,
scattered
as dust...
ashes
to
ashes,
amen.
In a list
A contest entry
- Life Poetry 101 by Dalaney.
1000 points, ended September 19, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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In every poem I read, I always find one line or a coupling of words I wish I had written. "hot air,
expelled expectantly,into the beyond and further..." this is one. Thank you so much for entering my contest
Love, Lane
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really nice poem
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Thank you
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"withered hopes"
Tell me about it, my Friend; I'll be 50 on the 24th. 
Amen & then some. 
Good luck in Lane's contest, Sweetie.
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Lol...this was not meant as a comparison my friend
Just a pic inspired ditty. As for being 50, been there, worn the tee-shirt 
now headed for the big 60!! Haha...life begins at 60
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