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Sad Puzzlebox

Box open,
surprise inside.
Inside supposedly heartwarming,
an infamous smile.
And here she lies on the floor,
emotions caving in.
For that one small piece
Seems to not be her friend.
One small piece
Now no where found.
And here she still lies,
her heart on the ground.
Will she ever find this piece?
The one that will whole her heart.
The one that will close everything off
and make her life stop falling apart.

Author notes

yeah... the piece is still missing... probably always will be...

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    September 23, 2008

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    very well penned
    heart-wrenching emotion that sets a somber tone to this piece

    very well done


  • Lady Australis silver member
    September 14, 2008

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    hey alex darling
    i havent seen you for ages but your poetry is still as amazeing as always
    this was really well wrettin