You would like to find
the perfect guy?
Maybe someone to love you
Til the day he dies.
Well, that my friend
just does not exist.
But there are some good ones out there
that you may have missed.
There is no such thing as perfect,
but some are better than others.
Some of us are perfect for friends,
some are better at being lovers.
Some guys out there are just no good,
All they cause is hate and pain.
But the one who's right for you
might like to dance in the rain.
There are, as it is said,
many fish in the sea.
All you have to do is look
and maybe you will see.
That perfect doesn't really matter,
as long as you don't mind
a flaw or too, maybe a bad habit.
Perfect is too rigidly defined.
Speaking as a guy
who's looking for the "perfect girl,"
Give it a chance.
what the hell, give it a whirl.
You'll never know he's perfect,
or he may be even right,
If you don't give it a chance
and sleep on it a night.
A contest entry
- The perfect guy [males only] by written-in-ink.
800 points, ended October 3, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very ncie
thank you for sharing how you feel about the perfect guy
i think that i agree with you
and i think that you did a wonderful job with your poem
thank you very much and good luck -
I just had to read this when i saw the title & then the poet. I admit that I did laugh and said ok let's see what he is writing about.From a guy's point of view all ladies are going to agree with it. I also know that I for one am not perfect & I have my faults but though not perfect I do try my best to treat ladies at their best with respect as well as other thing's. Thanks for sharing this piece with all of us here on AP and best of luck to you in the contest...........
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your whole poem just screams the truth :]
and yes, you are totally 100% right ! this speaks such truth-
You would like to find
the perfect guy?
Maybe someone to love you
Til the day he dies.
Well, that my friend
just does not exist.
But there are some good ones out there
that you may have missed.
no one is going to be happy if they are looking for perfection, which does not exist !! thanks for entering and best of luck !!
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:))))
wonderful!! and well written
if we are looking for profection we will never find happiness. i really enjoyed it my friend!
juliet
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