Gaia waches in dismay
While our time runns out
But we haven't given up.
The war is still on
The price of gas is still to high
Yet we still fight for this GREEN earth
We still fight for what we need
We still fight for the peace to the world
But most of all, we are fighting hand in hand.
Author notes
sad, world problems things like that
thank you
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Good poem, though there are a few misspelled words: "runns"--"runs"; "to"--"too". Just a friendly critique. Good luck.
Rock on--
DAWN -
"This is me and you
And we are running
To change the world
Where hope is shining through
Gaia's green and blue
And we are running
To save the world
That we're about to lose."
--Sarah Brightman, RUNNING
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