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Karma

Karma is a good thing,
Karma is a bad thing.
It goes both ways
A man that cheats
has karma come
to double the pain.
A woman who cheats
is karma herself.
A man that kills
is karma in the making.
A woman that steals
your man,
is karma with drama.
It works both ways.
You do it to someone else
they do it to you.
Saying it's right
is not an option,
it comes in handy
for the fucked up shit
that comes around.
Karma can go in circles
over and over again,
but in the end no one wins.
You might lose your life
or just your friend,
or even that man you
used to love.
It aint no joke
for Karma to
show her ugly face,
but please believe,
Karma ain't worth
catching no case.

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  • Kimojuno
    September 24, 2008

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    This poem makes the reader think and yet it is written in such a way that they do not realize it. I love how you brought a whole life into this poem-good job.

    Thank you for entering,
    Jeff.


  • Maxboy gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    You certainly do not pull any punches when you speek your mind. I would not want to see your man if you caught him with his Karma in the wrong place.

    Very Good
    Don


  • Ephiphany
    September 15, 2008
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    Sis

    you hit the nail on the head with this one!
    Oh my goodness I can feel every word, as if you were speaking it to me, based on the things, Ive endured in my relationships. Karma is just that, I liked when you said that no one wins...that is the truth. Gr8t job babygurl, I love this.

    -ephiphany


  • My Milieu
    September 15, 2008
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    Straight and true, let God deliver the karma.


  • spideracer gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    How very true

    You've touched on a human behavior that destroys ones kindness to other, for it is true that most people will only seek to do unto others what they themselves had done unto them. If it's good than expect good in return, but if it's bad, hell will come calling in return. Well done and good luck in the contest.

  • New-n-Improved
    September 14, 2008
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    What Comes Around, Goes Around!

    Everything happens for a reason,
    all the lies,
    all the games that play on each other,
    it's a way to make us stronger,
    so that we live longer,
    What comes around may not always be the thing that goes around,
    if you get cheated on doesn't mean that you're gonna cheat on someone,
    if you cheat on someone, it doesn't mean that someones's gonna cheat on you,
    it's only what you make it,
    andif you're not paying attention to what you dish out in life,
    then you will be a victim to karma,
    thatvery thing that you sent around will come around and go around for as long as you live,
    life is like a weed session,
    justcause there is a rotation,
    doesn't mean you have to smoke,
    you can choose to pass or you can choose to hit the blunt,
    but remember:
    once you're in the rotation,
    it's gonna come back to you,
    and it's gonna add to what you already have done,
    it's true; what comes around, goes around but it doesn't have to if you don't want it to,
    Always remember that Karma is the actionsthat youput out that you will get back but you don't have to get it back if you just getout of the rotation of life.
    when the world spins,
    if you're standing in the same spot today and you don't move,
    you'll be in the same spot next year and feel the same things that you felt last year.
    So if you don't want your faults coming back on you, you have to change your position in life and then karma will no longer exist for you.


    • Ms Sexy silver member
      September 15, 2008
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      well put derek i respect you alot for this


    • Ms Sexy silver member
      September 14, 2008
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      ain't that what i always say. But it also stops at some point

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