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Life

A feather drifting
Dawn to sunset and twilight
Embracing the world

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This is a very deep haiku that I thought of while looking out my window this morning. There is a lot of symbolism in it.

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    Wow this is very deep. A few short lines with a lot of deepness. I'm impressed. Thanks for sharing.
    Brian


  • SilverWolf
    September 14, 2008
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    Omigosh! Wow!! One of the greatest haiku's i have ever read! soo beautiful! Sooo peaceful! I bet your parents are proud as can be! They have every reason too! I don't know you but I am sure proud of ya!


  • Painted-Rose
    September 14, 2008
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    Nice job.