How can I go on without you,
When my world is dark and gray?
How can I breathe again now
When my moon is taken away?
You had my heart
it's taken away
and I don't know when
it's coming to stay
I cry each night
I am alone
I suffer for sins
I must atone
Days are dark
without you here
I can't go on
nothing to fear
I'll jump I will
from the cliff
Nothing else matters
not why, not if
Pain guides me
and it hurts so much
I loved you
now death is such
Without you
I'm a wilted flower
Never finding peace
Never gaining power
I'll crumble and die
after I weep and cry
You were my everything
I walk to the edge
I hope this doesn't hurt
My death I will pledge
And as I take a deep breath
Just before I jump
You are my last thought
My throat has a huge lump
I'm falling now faster it seems
You are nothing but a living dream
Author notes
'Before you, my life was like a moonless night. Very dark, but there were stars – points of light and reason. And then you shot across my sky like a meteor. Suddenly everything was on fire; there was brilliancy, there was beauty. When you were gone, when the meteor had fallen over the horizon, everything went black. Nothing had changed, but my eyes were blinded by the light. I couldn’t see the stars anymore. And there was no more reason for anything.'
A contest entry
- twilight quote inspired by Justmenow.
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Comments
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ok? it sounds like this is from bella, but the quote is from edward. whats with that?
besides that, its good. -
Wow
I love the twilight books and you just completely got that part in this poem. It is a real touching and moving poem it is amazing. It really captures the hurt bella feels and her brokeness -
I really liked your poem. I never thought of writing about another book in the Saga. Your poem is my favorite out of all the entries so far. Great job!
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wow, this is really amazing, well done this reads so well, and i love how this describes bella in new moon when he'd left her, well done, very well done.
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