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[Another one I cant finish]

My love
Art thou but a shadow of my memory
Passing me by and decieving my eyes?

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  • sarajaneUK
    September 14, 2008
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    Concise and thought provoking too. Should, though, in line 2, be, thou? Nice write. sj