It happened on an early September morn,
tide was gently swaying with the ocean’s sands.
Distance ship returning, blowing it’s foghorn.
My companion dog heeding all the commands.
Seeing your walk, I knew it was you instantly,
when the dog took off hearing your whistle.
Pounding of my heart as I walked briskly,
recalling your last words, causing me to wrestle.
Dare you be so handsome in the morning light,
as our lips touched and you held me tight.
Author notes
I want to be an auntie I think Christopher can use another great auntie.
A contest entry
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Comments
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I love the simplicity and yet the great beauty of this write. it was full of a sense of expectancy and suspense, and then concluded with an explosion of passion and light. this is truly beautiful
well done! thanks so much for entering the contest, and best of luck in it
peace ♥ -
Superbly penned piece, love the imagery and emotions here. Excellent read, good luck
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This is so beautiful...it is very touching and soft...what a wonderful feeling you have given the reader...yes I know Christopher could use another beautiful aunt and that you are...So we would be sister??? Then you would be his aunt?
Thank you for your time and friendship...he goes to court tomorrow...I will post as soon as I know anything...praying for the rehab/mental health...
Love,
mystic -
awww this is so sweet. i love this poem!
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