Rachel

Grazes in a sea of green
The sun reflects big black eyes

Often is what troubles seem
Beast lets out his faint cry

A lift of his little white head
and in seconds, he could be dead

Innocence does not pertain
In this iminent situation

Of that... I am certain
Now an unforgivable confrontation

Author notes

Rachel: Is of Hebrew backrgounds, means - Innocent Lamb

I also thought I'd give this a twist of humor... enjoy?

A contest entry

Behind the Name by Celticjedi. 600 points, ended October 18, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Paloszoo
September 16, 2008

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First off, Rachel is one of my favorite names! I love how you chose to take it and write the poem about the innocent lamb. It was very creative and well done! Thumbs up!