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Groundskeeper

Fading away
group by group
life slowly consumed
by silence
enjoyment lost to the gloom

Trash invading the floor
seats toppled
waste bins full
polluted chamber
forlorn reminders of the night

standing aside
by the dying embers of warmth
one man remains behind
grim expression
molded to his face
crippled by age
hair thinning gray
worry-lines consume brown eyes
quick glance around
deep breath of sorrow
day just barely begun

Stacking chairs with disdain
pitifully cleansing the floor
the man dejectedly does his job
one more party come to an end
as ever will be once again
just a specter, can do no more
than merely observe
and desire the joy. 

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this is a run-off of my poem 'Masquerade'

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  • movedon
    September 24, 2008

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    Masquerade is my favorite song from Phantom Of The Opera. rofl. Interesting take on the prompt.

    ing alone,
    Mylee


  • KyleBerg gold member
    September 24, 2008

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    Wonderful entry
    I could really feel the man's loneliness
    Great imagery and nice story
    Good luck and thanks for entering