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Focus of Intent

Missing image
the mind unlocks an arsenal of whims
provocatively poised to entice,
caution gives way to persuasion
influenced with intent to thrill,

eyes hypnotize in fluid motion
a striptease of rhythmic intoxication,
lips lick anticipation's desire
wound breathless in silken cries,

allurement flirts softly among whispers
turning on tendency of touch,
and we dance to seduction
                              of horizontal harmony.

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  • rhythmic intoxication - i wish i had some of that in my spirit right now and the striptease lol a good poem.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    Stunningly penned piece, some very neat alliteration here. Soft and subtle, beautiful to read. Thanks for entering and good luck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    A softly sensual write which is a lovely take on the picture!! "Horizontal harmony" hehe


  • StarEyes
    September 15, 2008

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    Sis,

    What a wonderful take on this picture! And well it sounds just as wonderful! And the images are like what I find in my dreams

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • notorious gold member
    September 14, 2008
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