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Done with you

i clench my fist and breath in deep
take my heart, its yours to keep
with no soul you cannot hide
what true feelings dwell inside
you lies and regrets tare you apart
but how can they if you haven't a heart
this i swear is my silent prayer
i hope you die and rot in hell
take your stupid hoe, might as well
hold her till daylight breaks
i hope my words are all it takes
to show you what you did to me
how my heart bled you see
but not for you
but someone who
i thought understood what was wrong
but you never care all along
you broke my trust
it was nothing but lust
i could see it in your eyes
and that is why your "love" dies
for once i thought you needed me
but you stupid fuck you played me
just like everyone who unknowingly entered your life
you stab them in the back with your soul taking knife
forgetting who they might have been
wishing they were the person they were back then
before i met you
there was so much i could do
i felt happiness from the suns rays
i felt peace threw out my days
you fucked me up inside so bad
i've lost touch with what i had
i lost myself because of you
a dumb mother fucker who
don't give a shit about the ones who care
for you i would have always been there
but you couldn't careless about me now
i don't have to sit and wonder how
you've got her and i can see
she is everthing i wouldn't be
she's easy, she's dumb
she'll swollow your cum
take your shitty slut cuz i'm done

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  • EvenStarsBreak--x
    October 26, 2008

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    "i clench my fist and breath in deep
    take my heart, its yours to keep "

    I liked this line the most. =] It was a nicely written poem. Good luck and thank you for the entry.

    x-Pretty-Odd-x <3


  • RowanMoon
    September 14, 2008
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    *Three snaps for the un-masked hatred!*