A guy that won't give less than dirt for diamonds
Leaving her for the undertaker or not at all
Take us for our sensitive side
Realize we are only people too
Not all of which portray the same coding
The same views and the same look that all guys get
Not all want just what's there and leave the rest
More so, such as I, want to know
Are you the kinda woman I could love walks with?
Opposite of all sad music
Run with me through green fields?
Perfection isn't explained but shown that it is alive
And so we shed the tears as we watch the girls leave
Because all they seem to see is the gossip of one another
And yet you
You girl you
You won't take a minute to use your eyes to see past
Our clumps of immature baby teeth
And see all that is soft
And what can be
Look hard enough
And see some of what you want in me
Author notes
Username: Dr. Cube
19 years of age. There is no perfection in a guy nor a girl that I know of to be true. A perfect guy will flat out admit that they are not perfect.
I myself have gone to and from relationships, all leaving me brokenhearted. I have been cheated on and left for many different reasosn.
A contest entry
- The perfect guy [males only] by written-in-ink.
800 points, ended October 3, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Abstract poetry.... 500 points ... PW allowed. by Manoj Sanyal.
500 points, ended March 23, 22 entries
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emotion filled.............
Thanks for participation.
Good luck,
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I'll tell you something, you should have won the contest! Anyways I adore this write. This is written very well, and you only speak the truth. I can relate to this one. It doesn't feel good to have someone cheat on you.
Good work here.
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god you just got me crying with this one.
and you know how hard that is to do.
i am sorry.
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you know, clever title first of all, but in a way you are right with this poem and your notes, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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I love this poem!! Don't give up..I'm sure there's more than one lovely girl out there.. who'd like to meet a guy like you!!
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Hey cube, nice one.
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i absolutely adore this poem !
you give me so much hope for guys !
yes i agree, imperfections only make you human. I think having imperfections means that everyone has weaknesses, which to me only makes you so much more likeable.
I'm also sorry you've been through some rocky relationships D: it's a horrible feeling.
but thanks for entering and best of luck !!
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very well said!
and i agree
inperfection is perfection
flaws=amazing
and im sorry that is very sad
i know i have been cheated on and left
and it wasnt very good
but thank you so much for this amazing write
you did a very good job
good luck
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