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Dreamland Ballerina.

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Lavender confusion touches lilac painted dreams,
A clockwork ballerina, improvised quatriemes.
Virtuoso on a music box, face of swathed delight,
Elegant persuasion, will dance in dreams this night.
Natural enchantment of a painted pirouette,
Dreamlands mystic dancer, lustered silhouette.
Eternally she dances in a ballet of illusion,
Remembered only briefly, in lavender confusion.
                   

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Credit- http://manips-of-artist2.deviantart.com/art/THE-MACHINE-OF-DREAMS-97370735



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  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    My fingers can't keep up with my mind when I type An excellent write, the rhyme is awesome...beautifully done! Thanks for entering and good luck


  • Black Narcissus gold member
    September 17, 2008
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    Lustered My fingers keep getting in the way when I type.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    Excellent take on the picture! A feeling of being lost in dreams and illusion!

    (is "lustred" supposed to be "lusted" or "luster"?)

  • subrosa
    September 14, 2008
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    this is really good, i love the feel of it. The imagery especially. It feels dreamlike.
    kudos.