Lovely little music box
May I sit and rest atop you
I've removed my ballet slippers
To let my toes relax on cue
Your music is so serene
The tempo is just right
To pirouette around the room
And dance away the night
I think the music is s l o w i n g d o w n
I'll give it a quick rewind
There it goes, back up to par
The notes are so divine
Thank you little music box
Your melody is supreme
My feet are rested and ready to dance
I'll dance all through my dream
Author notes
http://manips of artist 2.deviantart.com/art/THE-MACHINE-OF DREAMS-97370735
A contest entry
- Pretty Picture Prompt # 19 by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended September 18, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
Comments
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Awww this is sweet, happy and uplifting to read. A real cute take on the picture, one that made me
Superbly penned, thanks for entering and good luck
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Thank you LadyDenentia for your comment, it is greatly appreciated.
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A joyful take on the picture! I could see it playing out as I read! Just lovely!
("piourette" should be "pirouette"?)
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Thank you kiwigirljacks. I corrected my error. I thought sure I used spellcheck. Glad you enjoyed my poem. Katie
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Beautiful Sentiments, Poet!!!
Thank you for sharing!!! Peace, Cyn
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Thank you Rose, glad you enjoyed my poem. Katie
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Creative and full of lovely imagery. I really enjoyed reading this... Well done and best of luck.
Ken
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Thank you Ken, glad you enjoyed reading my poem. Katie
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