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Haiku - Turning Leaves

Novel words express 
scientific progress fresh
terms spring fall from press

flying books - guardianbookshop.co.uk 

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  • lespaulman225
    October 14, 2008
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    very wellw written. i agree with borntothepurple on how you used spring fresh


  • SignifyingNothing
    October 14, 2008

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    Well, first of all..AWESOME BACKGROUND!!!! I absolutely love it.

    Nice images, with the books too. The background and images really enhance the poem.

    Not that the poem really needs all that much enhancing, its very good. I like the way you used "spring fall" to describe the way the new ideas are written. And the way you break up "term" (term papers) with "press" and also the rhyme, which is very well done. I like this a lot.


  • trekkergirl
    September 20, 2008
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    loved the backgound. It fits wonderfully in with the poem

  • strangerforeigner
    September 15, 2008
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    Very nice. Much said with few words, just as poetry should be. Well done.


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    September 14, 2008

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    Excellent

    Nice, very nice, indeed, my friend. You've expressed yourself quite well as usual. Thanks for sharing this one with us.


  • SEA angel gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    Well done!!!

    The leaves in a book or an article. So true that scientific progress goes understated and isn't as paramount as latest fashion statement.

    The press like the roots of a tree and definitely paper made from trees so really profound "novel terms fall from the press" like leaves from a tree.

    You are a gifted writer with the gift of creative originality finding new angles of observation for intellectual insight.


  • unavailable
    September 14, 2008

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    Is this metaphoric Jon Robin?
    A great pleasure reading this. ♥

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