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Let it be.

Hide away,
The distance is calling
Stay here,
There is no need to leave now
Please listen,
What is this racket?
Static noise corresponding with the beating of hearts
Follow the winding lines
Where will this maze take you?
Turn with each corner
Everything will turn out just fine
It’s not over now.

Come on and let this be
Just how it is, it will stay.
Leave the dust behind
The essence of change isn’t far away

Let this be a last first wish
With eyes open wide
Undevided attetion will dream on.

Just let it be.
Stay in this lingering moment,
For the rest of all lives.

It will never end.

Author notes

moments that come and go really linger on forever.

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  • Frogzter gold member
    September 15, 2008
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    A most interesting read... Just let it be! Thanks for sharing and best wishes,

    Frogz~


  • Samplette gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    A bit hard to follow at some places, but a nice write. The one stanza"Come on and let this be
    Just how it is, it will stay.
    Leave the dust behind
    The essence of change isn’t far away" is what keeps this in as inspiring and uplifting. Thank you for entering.
    Sam