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Absence

Caressing my skin conjuring our moments
delicious memories taunt and haunt me
Come back to me my love.

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  • cookie-monster
    July 9
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    short. not my style at all.

    thx for entering


  • Swangrnv gold member
    June 30
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    nice

    short, but the longing is layed out here, very nicely done..


  • JinSays gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    Very sweet take on the prompt, thank you so much for entering, best of luck to you,
    jin


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 14, 2008

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    Beautiful flow..and wonderful call..and its intonation for the love.....I love it..well done..and thanks for sharing it..


    • cleo the sweet
      September 14, 2008
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      Than you so much :)

      you made my day! just thought in 18 words what could I say but I Miss Him with all I have got, so I said what I tell him always! My man is far away from me for the moment and I really do not know when are we going to be reunited again, if ever. I started to doubt everything
      Thank you for taking the time to read it and commenting

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