Tell me how can I trust you?
I will always wonder if…
You are telling me the truth
Wondering if you are
Where you say you are
Going to be!
Wondering what
It will be like tomorrow
Will you speak? Will we fight?
Will I pay for your bad day?
Will you use your fists,
In a temper again?
Will it be my fault again?
How can I trust you?
Not to hurt me again?
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A good piece - doesn't try too hard with the language and layout - just uses the emotions expressed to speak for itself.
I enjoyed this, nice final line, probably says the most of all.
James
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There is always that fine line when it comes to trust in a relationship, once broken, it is always difficult to find a way to move forward. But adding in intentional malevalance to an already painful situation is even worse... this was beautifully expressed and very well written indeed.
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Linda
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