I love the way
your hands feel
On my skin
I adore the way
you touch me
It melts me
Skin to skin
So close to me
I'm mesmerized
Lost in you
I can't stop
Feeling you
Hold me close
don't let go
I'm falling...
In love with you
I can't stop
this feeling
I'm all yours
Author notes
#1
A contest entry
- Adult Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
950 points, ended September 14, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this poem of yours is excellent. I love it a lot. your words paint a picture and the prompt isn't needed. this is a beautifully written piece. Excellent take on the prompt..
good luck in the contest
kat
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Speaks volumes to me
Without the image included I see this perfectly
Best wishes in Kat;s contest
Julie
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