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Arches ( HM )

Winged blades she arches

curves spine tingles,

plum of peach raised ...

 

Crumpled sheets passion the night

cover throw heat to much...

as there love burned to ashes.

 

lone figure of woman,

waiting..

for the shower spray he cleanses

 

slipping back..

to the arm's of her embrace.

Author notes

30 to 60 words.

Adult only contest

Option 2 Art.Uk.Com .

 

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  • trekkergirl
    September 22, 2008

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    nicely written. Another deserving of a trophy. I have not found one of your poems yet that I didn't like something about. You are an excellent writer! Great job here.


  • aboomer silver member
    September 14, 2008
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    Good wording and images - and a soft, sensuous feel to this.
    best wishes in your contest.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    Fantastic job with the prompt. the imagery is astounding. you've got such an awesome talent for bringing the reader into each write then you pen. Brilliant job.. oh yeah

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • daviscth silver member
    September 14, 2008

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    This is another amazing imagery filled poem sissy. I really liked the ending lines.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 14, 2008

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    A musical turn of the love is around the each line..and each word....I love it..well done..and thanks for sharing it..

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