Just get back in the hole
said the angel to the dead thing.
but my wife,my money,my aquarium.
you are a slave and your miserable
BAM the angel hit the dead thing with the shovel.
Just get in the hole
BAM another whack with the shovel,
He's startin to get it I thought,
Naah BAM I hit him again
Hell deserves it more than you.
WAAAAh thats all he said
whatever that meant
it was equal to nothing.
3 more whaps with the shovel
and then it could be used the way god intended
to bury the dead thing
before its misery could
contaminate the living.
A contest entry
- Bible Parody/Satire by MothandRust.
2400 points, ended October 2, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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An original write. Is this in the Bible? I'm always hearing of new material there; I don't really take much stock in it (well, parts of it have been a comfort). It really is the most amazing Book.
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That is very very interesting
I had to read that a few times and it is provocative.

