Inner sadness locked in boxes by a soul
who dares to shine.
Dreams of dancing free with purple air,
scents of lavender
and long awaited freedom.
…she patiently waits for her time to come
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Pretty Picture Prompt # 19 by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended September 18, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is wonderful. It has texture, sensorial impact, and all with brevity. I agree with 'kiwigirljacks' who is another quality poet, that you have captured the image's essence.
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Thank you so much, your time and thoughts are much appreciated
Cindy
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Lavender is a very pretty color. I loved how in so little words you managed to show me the whole picture!
Amazing!
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So very fitting for this pic! I love the lavender thoughts that I see and smell. Lavender is one of the most lovely colors and scents! I really loved the title as well.
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Thanx Aunty Az, I love love love lavender, so it was great to see these pics go up for contest etc, easy to write for
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You have captured what I see as the essence of this picture.. a soul trapped, only wanting to shine and dance and be free! And you did it eloquently and with beauty! This is brevity at it's best!
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Thanks SiS, I felt great the pic inspired, as many beofre have, you stumbled across a gold mine with these
Cind's
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Wow sis! This is was I've missed for the longest time on AP!! This little piece of brilliance; even in its brevity-- still shines like gold.
Love your soothing imagery & deep thoughts
I felt so calm while reading, & really adored
these lines much
"Dreams of dancing free with purple air,
scents of lavender"
--so very creative & well crafted
Loved it lots
Best of luck, definately worthy of gold in my eyes -
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Awww Thanks SiS, i really appreciate your kind words
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Hey hunni! Wicked write you've penned us here Love the imagery, great take on the picture Thanks for entering and good luck my light
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Thanks darl, It felt so good to feel inspired, so thank you
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Purpureal.
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ooh I love the word
Purpureal hehehe, did u make it up or is it real lol
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It's real.
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That rocks...I lov it
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Well, it's mine!!!!!!! Though I didn't use it in my entry 
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hehehehe
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Good write, I especially like the wording "with pruple air and scents of lavender. They fit well in your poem. Good luck in the contest. Katie
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I love to be able to truly create an atmosphere, these picture definitely allow that to happen, thank you
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Truly "purple prose"
A very gentle and sweet take on the prompt... Ahhh, I've missed reading you. Very well done and best of luck...
Ken
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Thanks Ken, I missed writing for Jacks and Pink's pretty pic series, so glad my muse wanted to come to life for this one hehe
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