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Smoken Hot

Missing image
Slowly sliding over every curve,
dropping to the floor
Leaving my manhood in a state,
we’ve both seen before

Sitting on our mattress’s edge,
awaiting your next move
Praying soon my sexy one,
I’ll be in the groove

Left in my euphoric state,
to dance the dance of love
Once again with no complaint,
we fit just like a glove

Author notes

Option 3 image found on art.uk.com tis image was to sweet to leave unused (60 words)


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  • hotchocolate gold member
    September 14, 2008
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    Love it Boog great picture goes real good with your write great job!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    Hot!!! I love this poem a lot. You did an Outstanding job with the prompt.. this is an excellent poem that is quite sensual.. I enjoyed reading it..

    good luck

    kat


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    September 14, 2008

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    I love this one! Brilliant work here.

    "Left in my euphoric state,
    to dance the dance of love
    Once again with no complaint,
    we fit just like a glove"

    It's always a wonderful feeling when
    you and the one you love are so compatable
    in every way. Well done and good luck
    to you with this one!




    Jeremy0826