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Sweet Dreams

Amazing, is the love that we share.
But I wonder, when did you get here?
Quickly, I decide that I just don’t care.
I ignore the obvious, as we get in high gear…

Hours we spend trying different things.
Like we did when we were still so full of life.
I look over and notice, you’re wearing my diamond ring!
Then I remember the day, I asked you to be my wife…

Now it’s over, but it was so perfect, so deep.
We lay together and I hold you so gently.
I kiss your neck as you begin to fall asleep.
Quickly I follow, embracing you so intently…

Slowly, I wake up and I feel your hand in mine.
I make myself believe this, or so it would seem.
In truth, our night together was just another sign.
That I can only be with you in my sad, sweet dreams…

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This is inspired by a dream that I've had very often, since she left. Wonderful, yet so painful.

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  • cokacolacowpok
    September 15, 2008

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    It is painful to go through any kind of breakup my friend. Time heals all wounds. Dreams have a way of letting you feel the love that once was.
    Brian