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Welcome to Hell, may I take your hopes and dreams?

Look at me
With the eyes that I took from you
Call me sick
I lay in your bed last night
And you never knew.
But what did I do?

  Rape is for the failures
  The insecure and the fuckin' boy diddlers
  And murder is so very, very fast             
  No, shivering girl, I wanted this to last

But what did I do?

  Why, I walked in your dreams!
  Don't cry, it's worse than it seems
  I know who you love
  Or rather, who you loved

Oh, what did I do!

  My, but your so very lonely now
  No reason to scream, no one's around
  Let's start with your throat
  Hmm, shall we make it your scroat?

At least now it will make sense when shit comes out of your mouth

  So lovely, when your clothed
  Beneath those layers, who else knows?
  The skin of humans makes me sick
  Let's save some time and get rid of it

Who am I, What am I?

  The drill left your leg with holes
  Now what did I do with your soul?
  Ah yes, here it is! You sold it to me
  And now I get to do this for all eternity

Welcome to Hell, may I take your hopes and dreams?
 
 



 






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  • HereComesTheSun
    September 14, 2008
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    holy shit an amazing poem wow.


  • corrupt angel
    September 14, 2008

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    Wow! This is so amusing. I loved it! The title and last line are pure genius. It caught my attention and drew me in. I loved the slightly mocking tone, made things quite interesting. It flowed wonderfully. My favorite poem I've read all night. I have to applaud you on that. Best of luck in the contest. Amazing write!