Bitter cold chills wrap themselves around me
as I bathed in the stagnent lake near
the wispy mountains at home.
Author notes
Prompt is the painting above titled ~ September Morning
by Paul Émile Chabas (1869-1937)
She looks cold to me.
A contest entry
- September Morning by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended September 14, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Truly descriptive and expressive... x
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this is beautiful
so short and simple but amazing
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