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Childhood sings in summer's fading light

Music plays drifting through the night air
laughter sounds full of innocence and silly words

In the eye of the mind a little brown eyed girl twirls
Spinning round and round with a fire in her eyes


Thoughts race through words in imaginary games
dragons and pirates and treasure is the flavor of smiles


Sunlight glints of a fragile four year old too young to be hurt
Dizzy with the addiction of movement she starts to fall to the grass


Crayons paint the night with cupcakes and hand drawn trains
Little gifts of life sprinkling around blonde curls and giggling bodies

Smell of living redwood and childhood at its best are the scents of brown hair
Memories of flying on rain wet metal swings and hiding in the branches of trees


Heavy weight of a silly five year old fills my arms and keeps me balanced
Sticky fingers holding tight to mine as loving whispers of gifted secrets touch my ears

Light falling from between branches stained a four year old;s head with memories
Getting up again a brown eyed girl spins and twirls faster than her dizziness- innocent

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  • isabellacohen
    September 29, 2008

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    lovely imagery

    I loved reading and wondering about your poem.
    You have some wonderful images here.
    Thanks for submitting your work,

    Best wishes,
    Isabella


  • Danna Hobart
    September 21, 2008
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    Thanks for entering.


  • Jesann gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    I really enjoyed this poem,you have some really beautiful imagery in there.Especially like "..as loving whispers of gifted secrets touch my ears"