He smiles, holding back tears.
He loves me, I'm sure, just doesn't know how to show it.
He has little quirks that others would find annoying.
Like stealing my nose like we used to do as kids.
He says things that others would find annoying.
Like, 'You know if a hippopotamus and an elephant were
having a race, I think I'd trip the elephant because
you never hear about a hippopotamus winning a race.'
He buys things for me that are sweet, that others might
find annoying. Like a yo-yo just like one he bought me
for Christmas, because he says it'll always come back just
like him and a puppy dog he named after himself so he could
always be by my side.
He smiles, he loves me, he just doesn't know how to show it.
Author notes
He's a fun loving guy and I really do love him for all the weird things he does. I think they're incredibly cute and sweet but other people don't. But it doesn't matter what other people think - as long as I'm happy.
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- Give Me Your Love! by SincerelyMegan.
575 points, ended September 14, 2008, 43 entries
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Comments
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nice. was the guy lil legend?
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sort of, its a bit about him and a bit about someone else
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It sounds like you have found true Love, which never ends and if so I am quite happy for you. Please keep writing, and never give up hope nor love-after all, what would a life be without either?
Keep writing
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Aw this is cute. I mean really cute.
I loved it.
If you have that much passion for someone it shouldn't matter what others think!
Great job!
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I love the title of your poem,and really enjoyed it..sweet! I think he does show it..just in his own unique way!!
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He's very unique and I wouldn't want him to be any other way
Thank you for your comment.
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