I’d craved tasting the salt
from your lips,
the passion in wandering hands
hoping to find their home,
and
feelings barely able to contain themselves
in my presence…
We’re here together now
ready to feel,
…set one another free
Author notes
39 words
pic from photobucket
In a list
A contest entry
- Adult Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
950 points, ended September 14, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful and extremely sensual! You deserved to win a trophy for this one!
Keep up the good work, I'm enjoying your poetry!
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So beautifully free...lovely sentiment and precious thoughts.
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P.S.
The dogs on your page are so cute and look so happy and loved! Blessed be~
I love the baby phases...how neat to think of the changes bringing forth your lovely child. Blessings on your growing family!
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Awww Thanks darl, such sweet words
glad u love my page, love the baby thing too, found it one day luckily hehe
Cind's
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Wow; gorgeous imagery & compelling thoughts.
Sensual portrayals & penned with passion.
Hey you know what this was a picture I
used for one of my previous sensual contests hehe.
You so would have won gold if you entered mine.
This was so beautiful!
Congrats on the shiney
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Awww stop it hehehehe
well i will probably write something bigger & better for yours heheheh, well one of the pic's
Lov ya sis
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For just 39 words......tastefully sensuous. Goes well with that picture.
best wishes in the contest.
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Thank you so much
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Oh I like
Soft pleasures in waiting.. set one another free..
Best wishes to you in Kat's contest
Julie
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Thank you Julie, it was great she stirred my muse to life with the pic
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Hun, you did a great job with this one. Your words fit perfectly.
Juls
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Thanks Cuz..I try
hehe
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Gorgeous sweetheart...sensual and overflowing with meaning. I know exactly the feelings you're talking about and you hit the nail right on the head with your words.
Keep those beautiful words coming
Best of luck in the contest
Love Mum
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Thanks mum, it felt so good to wrote sensually again
and well lets just say there might be some setting free, later when matt gets home heheh
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Wow, gorgeous write for this picture!
I love your background here. It really
brings life to your poem with its wording
and imagery! Lovely work here and all the
best to you with it in this contest! Thanks
a lot for sharing this here!
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WOW this is HOT!!!I see that your muse is on fire here.. wOOt!! you did an excellent job with this prompt and with your write. its so sensual and so filled with love. a write written from your heart.. I missed your sensual poems as well.
good luck in the contest
kat
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Thanks darl..I was so relieved when the pic inspired me, so thank you so much...trophy or no trophy, I love that I wrote again
Cind's
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Very enticing sis!! Wahoo... missed your sensual stuff!!
Ahh.. that kind of setting free is good !!
Gorgeous sensual write!
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i missed writing it, so glad Kat stirred my muse to life hehehe
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Oooh Mama!!!! lol Hot and delicious Cuz C
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I try
and well lets just say, Cindy is a little frustrated...so writing bout this right now, NOT HARD hehehehe
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